CHARACTERS - lineart

Okay, these two are my main characters for my manga. Period. I just came up with the most original idea I've had, ever..and I've never seen anything like it anywhere. First, I'm gonna come up with a story and post it on Fictionpress.net and link it from here as well. I'll draw it when I'm done. Of course, so the impact is better...I won't post until the end until my manga has caught up. Once I figure I'm on a roll, I'll start drawing.
The only thing is that the manga is gonna be heavily influenced by King of Bandits. I love that manga.

Anyway they're nameless... I think I want to name them after sushi or chocolate..or something.. I'll look it up...

Done in openCanvas. took 26 layers. I'll try coloring in openCanvas and Painter, because I've never tried Painter and I want to..

EDIT: Okay. A few things wrong. The perspective with the cross is STUPID. It has to be fixed. If you look closely, the bandages are in a position where you're looking down from them, but the cross is in a position where you're looking up. Same with the wooden sign. >.<. And I figured this out when i was TRYING to color...the girl's right eye...is too far apart....like its gonna slide off her face. And her right eyebrow is too short. Dang it. The guy's face looks wierd. -_-